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Thursday 21 May 2015

Friday sport recount

                                                           Friday Sport


We raced onto the bus to get there first. So Jack and I got there first. So we ran to 
the back of the bus “yeah I got the window seat”.  So Jack and I got out our ipods and we
played some songs. Let’s fast forward a bit. So we just arrived at hornby high I was very very very excited about firstly going to a new school for friday sport secondly the teams we will meet. 


After we played our games. On the bus Jack and I talked about princess TIM!!!!
 When we were back at school I saw all the little kids leaving school 
and all the mums looking at us like we were champions.
I felt so so so proud of myself. When I got back on home ground and I saw my mum 
I ‘’said yay i’m back’’. And we drove home as fast as a cheater.  

4 comments:

  1. You had good fun Tim.
    Try and add a little more describing words next time.

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  2. nice and juicy nice ajetives and add more full stops

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  3. that is a lot words but next time put in what you felt like please. :v)

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  4. that is a lot words but next time put in what you felt like please. :v)

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